Now that the football season's over, you can come see my new website outlining a proposal of mine about a game to teach incoming freshman about some trivia and geography at the University of Utah. The story is that BYU's mascot, Cosmo, has stolen the 2009 Sugar Bowl trophy and your the detective that has to follow the clues to find it. Come see the game at
http://fs.finearts.utah.edu/~adimick/CosmosRevenge/index.html.
I liked your script. It did a great job of teaching locations at the University. I liked the plot, and the topical humor of BYU wanting to get into the PAC-12. The only thing I didn't like the dialog spoken by Lestrade at the end.
ReplyDeleteBut overall, good job, it accomplished what it set out to do well.